Politically powered: I had noticed that my first essay was completely opinionated and had no official format. I had learned how to better word essays and not to keep an essay one sided because people generally do not want to hear one side of a story they would rather hear about the situation. I am proud of my enthusiasm that I was attempting to show towards politics but many people have different Ideas other than my own. Another thing that I am proud of is my attempted form of formatting an essay but in a more creative way. I believe that I have come a long way from writing essays in this kind of way.