H.O.M.S
This is the final draft of my House On Mango Street essay. My thesis:"Esperanza is a girl who lives in the ghetto but she knows that she is to strong to live on Mango Street forever." I had received a 2 on this assignment due to my lack of structure in this paper that could be improved.I had a well worded prompt but it could be changed and manipulated so that it can be a very strong essay. Revisions brought my essay up from a 1+ to a two do to some changing of the words and sentence. A goal next year for me is to choose my wording more carefully.
This is the final draft of my House On Mango Street essay. My thesis:"Esperanza is a girl who lives in the ghetto but she knows that she is to strong to live on Mango Street forever." I had received a 2 on this assignment due to my lack of structure in this paper that could be improved.I had a well worded prompt but it could be changed and manipulated so that it can be a very strong essay. Revisions brought my essay up from a 1+ to a two do to some changing of the words and sentence. A goal next year for me is to choose my wording more carefully.